Transcribed verbatim from a conversation with a lover.
Look at me.
Sir?
At me.
At you
Who do you belong to?
To you
To me?
Yes. You. Yours
Nobody else’s?
No
That’s right.
I’m yours
You’re mine.
You’re the only one who… who can
I’m the only one who does this to you.
Who I let… do this
You’re mine
Yes, Sir
Mine
Yes
Nobody else has you like this
Nobody
Nobody else comes inside you
Nobody. Only you
Only me. Your cunt is my property
Yes. Yes
It’s my cunt. You’re my cunt
Yes
Your body. Belongs to me
Yes
All of you. Mine
Yes
Yes
Yes
Simply lovely! So much is stated in those few words 🙂
Thank you. I always like to keep things concise!
Yes! So little words, such a strong emotion. That ‘yes’ says it all.
~ Marie
Glad you enjoyed reading!
What a simple text and yet so strong 🙂
Thank you – glad it resonated with you!
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I know this conversation!
Well written.
That was fun.
Glad it struck a familiar chord!
Oh, my. This is delicious.
I also love your use of ellipses to signify her losing her composure when you start touching her. It truly is titillating stuff.
So good to see this, it’s an exchange I have often with my Lord.
It’s comforting and submissive to keep repeating that he’s my owner and the only one who ever has and always will be the only one to ever do this to me.
I’m collared and thoroughly owned.
That was beautiful, Merry.
Just finished reading Teach Me by Jo Addison and it had me missing your writing, Kristan. Lately, other erotica authors have fallen flat for me and I usually find myself coming back to your work.
Thank you! Glad you keep coming back – and I appreciate the compliment. It means a lot.